Ready To Enter Part Two Of My Agent’s Contest?

I am thrilled that quite a number of fallible readers entered my literary agent’s fun contest this past week! If you’d like to read the top six “first lines” Rachelle chose from 301 entries, hop over to her site.

Now, you have a second opportunity to get a piece of your writing in front of an agent. Just choose one of the six first lines and write the next 300 words. The rules of the contest are on Rachelle’s site, with the deadline and prize information, so jump on over there.

I sure would love to see one of you fallible ones walk away with the big prize!

By the way, I’ve used the words hop, walk, and jump, probably because I’m excited that my line came in third place. And it’s about shoes. Lots and lots of shoes. All of them dropping. :)

Have fun, you contest-happy people, you!

Posted by Katy on 03/26/08 at 06:24 AM

Fallible Comments...

reinstate@freewill.com

As people begin to age the gods employ corrupting tactics. They ultimately begin to look down on the children and the wisdom they recently understood:::
They voluntarily turn their back on their opportunity to ascend and instead embrace evil.
It's not old people who go to heaven. Old people must come back because of the mistakes they've made throughout their lives. Children are the ones who have the opportunity to ascend.

Children are discounted by adults in society. The gods corrupt people as they age, use trust-building tactics and soon adults view the children as ignorant, yet to understand the god's system, and subsequently look down on the children. This is one of the most bitter, painful ironies the gods employ, for people consciously turn their back on and lose their opportunity to ascend::::
Religions teach that old people to go to heaven when they die. They don't. Old people are reincarnated. It's the children who go to heaven.
The wisdom the gods impart to children, either through their innocence/purity or religious-based educational pursuits are the gods sharing the truth with their most favored people::::It's the children whom the gods teach the right way for it is the children who have a chance. For example, they teach children to have faith, for understanding the god's geographical clues hurts people by illustrating negative things, opening the door for the god's to employ deceptive tactics.
Old people don't go to heaven. Old people must come back because of the mistakes they've made throughout their lives. It's the children who have the opportunity to go to "heaven". They must behave apprioriately, think correctly and be genuinely god-fearing. Their innocence and lack of desensitization ensures they have a real opportunity to achieve this goal.

This is charecteristic of the gods methodology::::The big prize gone early, deception compels people to chase something that has already been decided. They sent this clue with boss as well. It is also a clue supporting my claim RW&B;'s german is in fact Christianity's Anti-Christ. Logic also dictates, considering the definition.
The confusion over this multi-dimentional positioning will serve as an effective tactic, eliminating many additional disfavored in the process, for positioning states the Apocalypse to be a continuation of WorldWarII's Aryan superrace ideals, positioned as punishment for the 5th century invastion of the Roman Empire:::John's Fourth Reich.
This amounts only to "nested theater":::::Levels of positioning enables the gods to scapegoat:::::RW&B;merely is the tool the gods chose to execute the final scene of their scripted theater that is human history.
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